Blood – An Improved Haiku?

I mask my alarm.

Pain eats away within me.

Blood drips down my arm.

Was that better than the last one? I’m really enjoying this Haiku thing.

Help! Beta Readers

Any advice on how to find beta readers for my 80k words high fantasy novel?

A rough sketch of the world I built for my book series. This map shows the nation of Rane and it’s neighbors, Nanja and Incanth.

My first attempt at a haiku. Did I do it right?

Drops of sunshine dew.

Cling to the nighttime comfort.

Day is pain anew.